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| By Kimberly Hicks |
I am from a short journey unfinished, unwritten and unimagined. I am from the very distinction of reality and day-dreaming. Memories that flow through my brain like a movie film from a projector rewinding over and over like a broken record. Trying to re-imagine what they'd be like if I chose different direction. I am from the very feelings that swell inside your stomach like storm clouds. I am from happiness and creativity. I am from a past and an undecided future.
I really understand your poem and like your style
ReplyDeleteI really liked your last sentence.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said you are from a past
ReplyDeleteI like the simile you put in there.
ReplyDeleteThe picture was cool. I like the first sentence, then you brought up the movie line.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your poem and I like the line "trying to reimagine what they'd be like if I chose a different direction.
ReplyDeleteShort, but sweet. My absolute favorite line is "I am from the very distinction of reality and a daydream. "
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I can relate to your poem and your word choice makes the poem your own.
ReplyDeleteWow I like how you compared your thoughts as a movie projector and nice picture you incorporated to the poem
ReplyDeleteKim,
ReplyDeleteI like the simile you used to compare your memories to a broken record.
I like your word choice in the last sentence of your poem.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the picture and the description of the rewinding projector and broken record.
ReplyDeleteI like the line, "...like a movie film from a projector rewinding over and over like a Brocken record." I love the feelings in the poem.
ReplyDeleteI like how you described your journey in the first sentence.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was very good. I liked its tone and grammar. Good job!
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